Preserve Products

I was really, I was really, this one took my interest because first of all, it was It's normally dominated by product and gamble, unilater, the real big sellers in t And if you need a piece of that, that market, you're gonna do extremely well. So Made with love and recycled ocean plastics. So you're doing somet They got the video, w These images quite good. The question I would have here if you're a razor, who's your target market? Is it men or women? You're gonna put through here and there's one in the bath that may, for some men, may say, oh, it's probably a woman's product. It may be a different type of razor. So I'd probably make that clearer. Three images. That's the first one. Who's your ideal market? Put it up front in terms of one of the first two up here, two or three, in terms of them using the products. That's the first one. Work out if t We'll probably move it up here a bit But what I would look at further down, so it's got Preserve, it talks about it and t It helps the environment, the ocean. I want to go further down here. You've got stuff about the Preserve story. And when I saw this video, it was a bit surprised because I started talking about the Bola Cereal Cons So obviously they're doing really good calls. And I t I'd even do an image around how you're helping the environment by doing t But in a nice way, so people don't, in a nice way, so it shows the reduction you're doing. Also, to look at your keyword analysis. So this one, you don't need to worry about But there's definitely some ones down here. I want to look at who your audience is. Is it Men or Women? How are you targeting? I didn't see a lot around terms of keywords in terms of recyclable or environmentally friendly raises. I'm not sure what that key one is. But it looked So to s I'll definitely fix up some of these boards here. Get rid of all the caps here. Just if you're only using two caps, maybe two or three words max. But I'll sharpen that's the first one. Fix out the bullet points. The second one is work out who your avatar is and get that image up towards the top. T And the fourth one, t And the fourth one is just get alignment down here. If someone really wants to know about your cause, I'll probably go down here. Just make sure it's all aligned. I really enjoyed doing t Any questions, feel free to reach out. Thanks.